The Cross-Country race
"The end is in sight," I whisper to myself. "Bang!"the wood blocks slam together the race is on. My legs start pumping up and down like pistons one lap down two to go. My legs start to tremble and my berth starts to go faster two laps down one to go as I go past the crowd they start to clap now the race is on it’s the last lap.
Everyone starts running as fast as they can. "GO! GO! GO! Shouted Mrs Warner!"
I start sweating even more.Then I start to spirit as fast as I can. I pass one person he pass’s me. I pass two people and pass the finish line.
Well done. I like the way you used paragraphs in your writing. I thought the cross country was hard and tough. What did you see while you were running?
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